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Author Topic: The Elementals: Prolouge  (Read 775 times)
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« on: November 11, 2009, 07:02:10 PM »

For the past 20 years, the elements of the world went to war. They gave all caused great damage to each other just to prove who is the better element.

There are 12 elements in this world......and all want to prove its worth.

Air believed of its flow.

Fire believed of its power.

Water believed of its clamness.

Earth believed of its ground.

Leaf believed of its plants.

Ice believed of its coldness.

Lighting believed of its electricty

Metal believed of its mechanics.

Psychic believed of its mental.

Light believed of sunlight.

Dark would believe of its destruction.

Dream was believed of its soothing.

All have reasons.......yet why? A question that is asked today why are we still fighting?
Everyone thought peace was lost....no end of this war.....until now.

These adventures will tell a tale of 12 people who will bring peace to the world. These people will change history forever as their life progresses through the goodness....and the pains of the world




Chapter 1 will be soon. Along with locations of the kingdoms.





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« Reply #1 on: December 10, 2009, 12:58:26 PM »

...clamness.

This is a pretty cliche concept, honestly. But, it seems like you've put some heart into it. However, you might want to brush up on yur english and re-consider how some of the concepts/representatives of the elements are listed.
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« Reply #2 on: December 11, 2009, 12:52:26 PM »

...clamness.
Clamness?

Is that where you flop down on the conch and don't move a mussel?
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